"Our solar system is collapsing!" Nora, Scientist, yelled. "With-in 24 hours everything we know and love is going to be gone!"
"You must be crazy," Hank, A vain self-centered Man," There is no way that our solar system will collapse, it is all tied together with gravity you nut!”
“You can think whatever you want. But I’ve been studying our solar system for more than ten years, and I can guaranty that our sun and all of our neighboring planets will be gone.”
“Whatever you…”
Millions of people scream and cry.
http://io9.com/5286253/mercury-to-blame-for-solar-systems-collapse-mars-earth-collision
I liked how it was short and to the point, but maybe it was too short. It would of been even better if you had gone into more details about somethings. I did like how you ended it, and how Hank died before he could finish his sentences.
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